My picture book is a take-off on Brian Froud's smashed fairy book, but it's based on my current reality of living in mosquito infested apartment.
My play is for my kinder's year-end performance. 15 minutes, 2 musical numbers. Everyone needs to be equally represented in the dialog. I think this pretty close. I could use some feed back.
Tell me what you think. Here it is...
Yellow Submarine- LCI version
The Beatles agree to accompany Captain Fred in his Yellow Submarine and go to Pepperland to free it from the music hating Meanies.
Cast:
Jayden
Tom
Harry
Andy
John
Sean
Amy
Siena
Grace
Charlotte
Helen
The Meanies
Nowhere (Wo)Man
Blue Meanie
Red Meanie
Yellow Meanie
The Beatles +1
George (ina)
Paul (ina) or (Polly)
Ringo
John
Yoko
Sgt. Pepper
Cpt. Fred (ricka
Setting:
The Beatles and Yoko are hanging out at Apple Record studio.
Yoko: “Hey gang, let’s go to the beach!”
John: “Great idea Yoko. I’ll bring my guitar.”
Paul: “And I’ll bring my piano so we can make music.”
George: “I’ve got some left over shrimp I could bring.”
Ringo: “I’ll make my world famous egg salad.”
Yoko: “Now where are my sunglasses...”
Setting: Pepperland.
Sgt. Pepper is working in his kelp garden, Cpt. Fred approaches.
The Meanies and the Nowhere Man are hiding in different places on the stage.
Sgt. Pepper: Humming his song...
Cpt. Fred: “Sargent Pepper! Ahoy there! What are you doing today?”
Sgt. Pepper: “Nothing much, I’m just harvesting some kelp for supper.”
Cpt. Fred: “How’s the crop this year?”
Sgt. Pepper: “Not bad, but I haven’t been able to keep those pesky Kelp Crabs out of my garden. I need to get some crab traps.”
Cpt. Fred: “I’m sorry to.....
The Nowhere Man and his Meanies jump out from their hiding places.
Nowhere Man: “AH HA! I have caught you without your Lonely Hearts Club Band! They’re always singing and making music. We Meanies HATE music.”
ALL MEANIES: “ YEAH, WE MEANIES HATE MUSIC!”
Blue Meanie: “We’ve been waiting for this moment for years!”
Yellow Meanie: “Finally, we can put a stop to all of this MUSIC nonsense!”
Red Meanie: “Ha Ha Ha! We’ll take him back to Nowhere land”
Blue Meanie: “Alright Meanies, get your nets!”
The Meanies throw their nets over Sgt. Pepper and begin to take
him off stage.
Sgt. Pepper: “ Cpt. Fred! Quickly, go get help!”
Yellow Meanie: “Don’t let him get away!”
Cpt. Fred: “Don’t worry, I’ll be back soon with help!”
Cpt. Fred runs off stage. With Red Meanie chasing him.
Red Meanie comes back onto stage.
Red Meanie: “I couldn’t catch him, he was too fast for me.”
Blue Meanie: “No problem, let’s get him to the dungeon.”
Yellow Meanie: “We’ll put tape over his mouth”
Red Meanie: “And stick cotton in his ears”
Nowhere Man: “You’ll never make music again Sargent Pepper!”
Blue Meanie: “Throw him into the Mean Machine!”
NwMan/Meanies: “NO MORE MUSIC IN PEPPERLAND, NO MORE MUSIC IN
PEPPERLAND.........”
Setting:
Cpt. Fred runs up tired and out of breath.
Cpt. Fred: “Beatles! HELP! Sargent Pepper has been kidnapped by the Nowhere Man and
John: “Oh no, this is terrible! We need to rescue him.”
Paul: “Pepperland can’t survive without music.”
George: “But we don’t know where they’re keeping him.”
Ringo: “Captain Fred, do have any idea where the Meanies might have taken Sargent Pepper?”
Cpt: Fred: “I think so. They said they were taking him to Nowhere land.”
Yoko: “If we hurry, I bet we can catch them in the Yellow Submarine!”
John: “Great idea Yoko! Everyone to the Yellow Submarine!”
Everyone sings: Yellow Submarine. The Beatles/Cpt. Fred float around
Paul: “There they are, and they have Sargent Pepper.”
George: “Poor Sargent Pepper. He’s being held in a net like a tuna fish!”
Ringo: “We need to hurry! They’re almost to the gates of Nowhere land!”
Cpt Fred: “But how will we stop him?”
Yoko: “I know, we need to teach the Meanies to like music”
John: to the Nowhere Man: “Great idea Yoko! Nowhere Man, please listen!”
Paul: “You don’t know what you’re missing!”
George: “He’s not stopping, he knows exactly where he’s going to!”
Nowhere Man: “Go away! We’re going keep Sargent Pepper in Nowhere land forever!”
Blue Meanie: “Yeah, Pepperland will never sing again!”
Ringo: “Well, he definitely has a point of view.”
Yellow Meanie: to Ringo “That’s right. And there’s nothing you can do to change our
Red Meanie: “We will never learn to like music!”
Yoko: “But how do you know if you like music or not? Maybe you just haven’t heard a song
that you like.”
John: “Great idea Yoko! They’ve probably just never heard good music before.”
Paul: “All right guys. Let’s sing a song for them.”
Blue Meanie: to George “Is music always this fun?”
Yellow Meanie: “Yeah, that was great!”
Red Meanie: to Nowhere Man “How come we’ve never heard good music before?
Nowhere Man: looking at Sgt. Pepper “It was 20 years ago today, that Sargent
Sgt. Pepper puts his hands over his face.
George: “That’s right! I remember now.... The Band!
Ringo: to Nowhere Man ”Hey.... Nowhere Man.... you used to be in Sargent Pepper’s
Yoko: “ I remember now! Didn’t you break up over a girl?”
Blue/Yellow/Red Meanies: “ Is that true boss? “
Nowhere Man: “Yes, it is. Her name was Maggie May....”
Cpt. Fred: “And she stole the sargent’s heart....”
Everyone looks at Sgt. Pepper
Sgt. Pepper: “She also stole my diamonds and ran away with her friend Lucy”
John: “I think there’s a lesson in here somewhere.”
Blue Meanie: “Friendship is very important”
Yellow Meanie: “ Nowhere Man’s feelings were really hurt”
Red Meanie: “Sargent Pepper should have apologized to his best friend.”
Sgt. Pepper: to Red Meanie “You’re right.”
George: to the audience “You’re such a lovely audience.”
Ringo: to the audience “We’d love to take you home.”
All: to the audience “We hope you have enjoyed the show.
Everyone waves, bows, and exits the stage.
Stupid Blogger, I don't understand the formatting, I put some of the text in in the way that I wanted it, I but I getus, so instead of trying to edit the above random blocks of white.... I'm leaving them. You get the gist.
And I needed to add this little gem. From a student. I wish he was my student, and that I could take credit for this work of genius.
Take care.
The Beatles agree to accompany Captain Fred in his Yellow Submarine and go to Pepperland to free it from the music hating Meanies.
Cast:
Jayden
Tom
Harry
Andy
John
Sean
Amy
Siena
Grace
Charlotte
Helen
The Meanies
Nowhere (Wo)Man
Blue Meanie
Red Meanie
Yellow Meanie
The Beatles +1
Paul (ina) or (Polly)
Ringo
John
Yoko
Sgt. Pepper
Cpt. Fred (ricka
Setting:
The Beatles and Yoko are hanging out at Apple Record studio.
Yoko: “Hey gang, let’s go to the beach!”
John: “Great idea Yoko. I’ll bring my guitar.”
Paul: “And I’ll bring my piano so we can make music.”
George: “I’ve got some left over shrimp I could bring.”
Ringo: “I’ll make my world famous egg salad.”
Yoko: “Now where are my sunglasses...”
Setting: Pepperland.
Sgt. Pepper is working in his kelp garden, Cpt. Fred approaches.
The Meanies and the Nowhere Man are hiding in different places on the stage.
Sgt. Pepper: Humming his song...
Cpt. Fred: “Sargent Pepper! Ahoy there! What are you doing today?”
Sgt. Pepper: “Nothing much, I’m just harvesting some kelp for supper.”
Cpt. Fred: “How’s the crop this year?”
Sgt. Pepper: “Not bad, but I haven’t been able to keep those pesky Kelp Crabs out of my garden. I need to get some crab traps.”
Cpt. Fred: “I’m sorry to.....
The Nowhere Man and his Meanies jump out from their hiding places.
Nowhere Man: “AH HA! I have caught you without your Lonely Hearts Club Band! They’re always singing and making music. We Meanies HATE music.”
ALL MEANIES: “ YEAH, WE MEANIES HATE MUSIC!”
Blue Meanie: “We’ve been waiting for this moment for years!”
Yellow Meanie: “Finally, we can put a stop to all of this MUSIC nonsense!”
Red Meanie: “Ha Ha Ha! We’ll take him back to Nowhere land”
Blue Meanie: “Alright Meanies, get your nets!”
The Meanies throw their nets over Sgt. Pepper and begin to take
him off stage.
Sgt. Pepper: “ Cpt. Fred! Quickly, go get help!”
Yellow Meanie: “Don’t let him get away!”
Cpt. Fred: “Don’t worry, I’ll be back soon with help!”
Cpt. Fred runs off stage. With Red Meanie chasing him.
Red Meanie comes back onto stage.
Red Meanie: “I couldn’t catch him, he was too fast for me.”
Blue Meanie: “No problem, let’s get him to the dungeon.”
Yellow Meanie: “We’ll put tape over his mouth”
Red Meanie: “And stick cotton in his ears”
Nowhere Man: “You’ll never make music again Sargent Pepper!”
Blue Meanie: “Throw him into the Mean Machine!”
NwMan/Meanies: “NO MORE MUSIC IN PEPPERLAND, NO MORE MUSIC IN
PEPPERLAND.........”
while taking Sgt Pepper off stage
Setting:
The beach: The Beatles are eating egg salad, John is playing
guitar, Paul is playing piano. Cpt. Fred runs up tired and out of breath.
Cpt. Fred: “Beatles! HELP! Sargent Pepper has been kidnapped by the Nowhere Man and
the Meanies!”
John: “Oh no, this is terrible! We need to rescue him.”
Paul: “Pepperland can’t survive without music.”
George: “But we don’t know where they’re keeping him.”
Ringo: “Captain Fred, do have any idea where the Meanies might have taken Sargent Pepper?”
Cpt: Fred: “I think so. They said they were taking him to Nowhere land.”
Yoko: “If we hurry, I bet we can catch them in the Yellow Submarine!”
John: “Great idea Yoko! Everyone to the Yellow Submarine!”
Everyone sings: Yellow Submarine. The Beatles/Cpt. Fred float around
the stage in the Yellow Submarine. At “And our friends are all
aboard...” they find the Meanies and chase them around the stage.
Paul: “There they are, and they have Sargent Pepper.”
George: “Poor Sargent Pepper. He’s being held in a net like a tuna fish!”
Ringo: “We need to hurry! They’re almost to the gates of Nowhere land!”
Cpt Fred: “But how will we stop him?”
Yoko: “I know, we need to teach the Meanies to like music”
John: to the Nowhere Man: “Great idea Yoko! Nowhere Man, please listen!”
Paul: “You don’t know what you’re missing!”
George: “He’s not stopping, he knows exactly where he’s going to!”
Nowhere Man: “Go away! We’re going keep Sargent Pepper in Nowhere land forever!”
Blue Meanie: “Yeah, Pepperland will never sing again!”
Ringo: “Well, he definitely has a point of view.”
Yellow Meanie: to Ringo “That’s right. And there’s nothing you can do to change our
minds!”
Red Meanie: “We will never learn to like music!”
Yoko: “But how do you know if you like music or not? Maybe you just haven’t heard a song
that you like.”
John: “Great idea Yoko! They’ve probably just never heard good music before.”
Paul: “All right guys. Let’s sing a song for them.”
The Beatles start to sing “All Together Now”.
At “Boom bah boom” the Meanies start to sing and enjoy
themselves.
Blue Meanie: to George “Is music always this fun?”
Yellow Meanie: “Yeah, that was great!”
Red Meanie: to Nowhere Man “How come we’ve never heard good music before?
Nowhere Man: looking at Sgt. Pepper “It was 20 years ago today, that Sargent
Pepper taught the band to play.”
Sgt. Pepper puts his hands over his face.
George: “That’s right! I remember now.... The Band!
Ringo: to Nowhere Man ”Hey.... Nowhere Man.... you used to be in Sargent Pepper’s
band.”
Yoko: “ I remember now! Didn’t you break up over a girl?”
Blue/Yellow/Red Meanies: “ Is that true boss? “
Everyone looks at Nowhere Man.
Nowhere Man: “Yes, it is. Her name was Maggie May....”
Cpt. Fred: “And she stole the sargent’s heart....”
Everyone looks at Sgt. Pepper
Sgt. Pepper: “She also stole my diamonds and ran away with her friend Lucy”
John: “I think there’s a lesson in here somewhere.”
Blue Meanie: “Friendship is very important”
Yellow Meanie: “ Nowhere Man’s feelings were really hurt”
Red Meanie: “Sargent Pepper should have apologized to his best friend.”
Sgt. Pepper: to Red Meanie “You’re right.”
to Nowhere Man “I’m so sorry for hurting your feelings.”
George: to the audience “You’re such a lovely audience.”
Ringo: to the audience “We’d love to take you home.”
All: to the audience “We hope you have enjoyed the show.
We’re sorry, but it’s time to go”
Everyone waves, bows, and exits the stage.
Stupid Blogger, I don't understand the formatting, I put some of the text in in the way that I wanted it, I but I getus, so instead of trying to edit the above random blocks of white.... I'm leaving them. You get the gist.
And I needed to add this little gem. From a student. I wish he was my student, and that I could take credit for this work of genius.
-Diary of a mud snail.
I am super handsome mud snail. In science class Kane take me in his house. Kane don’t care me and don’t give me a water. Every day Kane’s mom give me a water and vegetables. I want to play with Kane but Kane don’t play with me and he play with toy. I am in water and Kane is out of the water. My poo poo is black. Kane’s poo poo is black. I have antena and Kane don’t have antena. Sometimes I was very hungry, but I can’t speak. I was came with my friend but he was died because water is dirty. I hate Kane. I am very sick. I want to live along time but I died last week. I am in the heaven with god and my friends.-
I am super handsome mud snail. In science class Kane take me in his house. Kane don’t care me and don’t give me a water. Every day Kane’s mom give me a water and vegetables. I want to play with Kane but Kane don’t play with me and he play with toy. I am in water and Kane is out of the water. My poo poo is black. Kane’s poo poo is black. I have antena and Kane don’t have antena. Sometimes I was very hungry, but I can’t speak. I was came with my friend but he was died because water is dirty. I hate Kane. I am very sick. I want to live along time but I died last week. I am in the heaven with god and my friends.-
Take care.
